СРОЧНО! Проверьте ошибки пожалуйста! In Moscow cultural life is very saturated. Thereare a lot of famous theatres and galleries: the Bolshoi, the Maly

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In  Moscow cultural life is very saturated. There
are a lot of famous theatres and galleries: the Bolshoi, the Maly Theatres, the
Operetta Theatre and the Art Theater. It's incredible but in Moscow there are
about ninety theatres and seventy museums. A foreigner not just to recommend
anything. But we can offer a few places that bring joy to people. One of these
places is the old Yuri Nikulin circus. It was opened in 1880. It is famous for
its various programs for the children. Currently more than 2000 spectators can
watch a wonderful program. Wild animals participate in the programs. The Moscow
Dolphinarium is the best opportunity to see the marine mammals. People admire a
white whale and Dolphin watching. These places are popular attractions. Maybe
this type of entertainment is forcing people come to Moscow.

  • In  Moscow cultural life is very saturated. лучше употребить структуру there is, т.к. лучше in Moscow убрать в конец предложения.
    "the Bolshoi, the Maly Theatres" - the Bolshoi THEATRE, the Maly Thatre а то получается как будто они большие и мальнеькие по размеру а это не так. 
     в середине 3 раза друг за другом повторяются формы слова program - надо избежать повтора.
    В целом нормально)

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